There are some good points here, but you do not emphasize the role of the audience in the decisions you made and how they perceived your work. You need to make more reference to key terminology and theoretical ideas; Stuart Hall audience reception theory, the categories that your target audience fit into (aspirers, mainstreamers and how your specifically targeted them and how they specifically influenced the different decisions you made throughout the production. You do not discuss your ancillary tasks with reference to feedback either?
There are some good points here, but you do not emphasize the role of the audience in the decisions you made and how they perceived your work. You need to make more reference to key terminology and theoretical ideas; Stuart Hall audience reception theory, the categories that your target audience fit into (aspirers, mainstreamers and how your specifically targeted them and how they specifically influenced the different decisions you made throughout the production. You do not discuss your ancillary tasks with reference to feedback either?
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